IELTS Writing Task 2: Benefits of technology

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Đề bài:

Whether or not you think technology such as cell phones, computers, and DVDs benefit our society

Write at least 250 words.

However, technology usage could also be problematic. One issue is that the overuse of technology may harm people’s relationship. For example, many people now prefer online contacting to direct communication. Keeping contact through the Internet is indeed convenient, but in the long term it may make people more distant. In addition, the rapid development of and easy access to cell phones and computers make it more difficult to control behaviours of youngsters. A good demonstration is that teenagers could get access to inappropriate information from Internet forums. Later, they can even be incited to carry out harmful behaviours, as seen in the case of Islamic States.

In short, it is undeniable that the society benefits greatly from technology, but we also should bear in mind the potential detrimental effects of technology.

(133 words)